what does this need?!?!

[teyekanik]

I can't tell man... I want to color it but something about it doesn't sit.. I think its the BG but I cant think of a great one while looking at this.. ne ideas?

http://www.inkmafia.com/coppermine/albums/userpics/jedi%20copy.jpg

[ShamrockSpecial]

Looks great to me... I want to see it colored
Maybe add some explosions or something in
the bg. It seems there is a lot going on in the
foreground but nothin in the bg i dont think
wars are that contained. But pleasse pleaseee
color it.

[Mr.Blonde]

i agree with the above poster that there needs to be more action in the background.

i think some more vehicles like speeder bikes and scout troopers might be in order here.

more stormtroopers in general too

maybe some laser blasts coming from background to foreground would add some depth.

what you have here now is very nice, i suggest when you color it make the background dull compared to the foreground to make sure that none of what you have right now gets lost in the din of battle. a sort of "fog of war" if you will.

i love star wars:)

[Rob E. Lee]

I think it needs something along the horizon line to break the open space. Maybe a horizon of the planet with maybe some small action going on in the background.

Just a comment.

Rob E. Lee

[teyekanik]

thanks for all the help guys! I will work on it . ..

[teyekanik]

thanks for all the help guys! I will work on it . ..