=things=(Warning some adult & man parts)

[brachypelman]

hello artists
i'm just trying to improve, i know i need to work a lot. Let me know what you think.:)

http://pinkspiders.free.fr/brachy/5.jpg

http://pinkspiders.free.fr/brachy/6.jpg

http://pinkspiders.free.fr/brachy/7.jpg

http://pinkspiders.free.fr/brachy/page2.jpg

http://pinkspiders.free.fr/brachy/page3.jpg

[Calle_]

well first of i think you shoud REMOVE ALL COCKS!!!!! other then that, pretty good

[Slash]

I second that. The less cocks the better.

[Montross]

Yeah, Its like Cock Fest 04'. Hey your comic sequences are good though man. I like the perspectives.

[weirdwes]

If you want to get some serious critiques, I'd save the PR0N for your harddrive and post less risque stuff here. There is northing wrong with drawing a nude if you're doing human studies or the like, but posting something as you have is going to draw more comments about the content rather the quality. You did do the right thing by posting a warning so props on that.

I'd say your figures have a good amount of motion to them and that's a good thing. Your sketches seem to have more energy than your final pieces so you might want to try and find a way to carry that over when your finalizing a piece. Of course this is just my opinion and may not be the opinion for others.

Other than that I'd say just keep practicing as you're definitely doing more right than you are wrong.

[mr.right]

Hey brachy,

Was surprised to see you on the forums -- I found your old site a while ago and when it disappeared I thought I'd seen/heard the last of you. I'm glad that's not the case.

I can't say I really care for erotic art, but I've always enjoyed your style. As for a serious critique, I think the comic panelling has a good flow. You definitely manage to convey motion without clumsy motion lines. You also have a great command over perspective. My concerns, I guess, would be better directed at individual panels: The very first panel, the small running guy doesn't look like he's running -- it looks like he's jogging or something, if he's fleeing the scene he should be going as fast as he looks to be going through the rest. In the sixth to last frame the guy's mustache looks crooked and in the third to last the hand looks weird for some reason...

I checked out your new site and was sad not to see your old work, but your color has gotten WAY better.

Later Days;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;lll

[jca]

yea, no cocks please

[Agat_vonghoul]

i dont think there cocks i think there just really lifelike dildos :D

[Strife25]

great stuff. I dont mean to be a tattle tale but I have seen plenty of things on this board of the same nature. Example would be from Coro(another great artist). So of his stuff is graphic as well Girls riding cocks and money shots. Why r u guys riding this guys balls and then tellin coro that his stuff is the shit(and it is). It should be all or none.
Back to the topic at hand. Great forms man. I am trying to get better at anatomy myself. I Should post my sketches I have been doing for the past month. My problem is I am always using ref because I forget where and how things connect. In other words with the use of ref I can draw really well. Even if I take the drawing far past the the original pic. But I have a hard time drawing from memory. Did you have the same problem, Anyways I rambling its late here. Keep up the great work. I would like to see more male figures from you(Not in those positions that you draw women though). Peace out!!!!!!!

[jca]

ey, i never said i liked the money and dickride shots either.. lmao nah we're just messin around, the drawings are good sketches to be honest.. just that.. the rooster needs to go back in the the shed...rofl

[Agat_vonghoul]

well im sorry but i am against cocks :D but i forgive you guys lol

[Spartan]

It's all just art. Some people like some stuff, others like other stuff. I like that people are free to post whatever they want here. Props on the warning as well, tho.

I think your sequential stuff is pretty good, though your layout on the first page is a bit confused. Try using the Z technique to create a smooth, flowing layout.

Keep it up - and as far as I'm concerned you can post whatever you like.
Spartan

[Carnifex]

hey is that girl with the ponytails not from a fighting game or something?i think i know her.
nothing wrong with cocks-if coro can do it-why not you?
it is shocking at first i agree,but we so often see sites as domai.com with vaginas and stuff(although not in such situations) so why hide the male crotch?
good fluidity in the comics and post some more.:)

edit: oh and you should really drop the checkered paper

[brachypelman]

Thanks guyz for the words.

For the comic pages, i think that i'll have to redraw characters... the are not very well done...

concerning the cock problem : I really like drawing cocks, as i like drawing boobs, or pussies. So for me, it's just something that i draw, because i like it, and i post it the same way, just because it's a part of what i draw. But isn't it a "porn subject" problem, instead of a cock problem ?
A porn subject can turn a drawing really bad if your drawing skills are not enough to turn it into a good piece of art... so maybe i'm not good enough now for it... maybe the real trouble is here...

anyway, i wont post this kind od pic if the forums don't want it.
Just let me know:)

for now, i'm just trying to improve...

http://pinkspiders.free.fr/brachy/8.jpg

http://pinkspiders.free.fr/brachy/9.jpg

[stilts]

nice stuff, your a sick child but i like those comic strips :D

[Luke Mrozek]

I would just like to know if Sarpierri would post one of his images here, they would all jump at him and tell him: no cocks here!!! LOL

Cool drawings, m8.

[one2hit]

very nice stuff. This image right here:

http://pinkspiders.free.fr/brachy/7.jpg

I love the expresion of the bald man's face on the lower right. It's the perfect "hrmmmmm hold on a second" look

XD

and yeah, the cocks are ok. People need to not be so uptight about it, but like...maybe it'd be better if there was just one per woman O_o so we don't make it look to much like slutty pr0n. One is like, it could be a b/f or the milkman, two or more is like gangbang time >__<