Seductress WIP (nude)

[Snakebyte]

First of all I need to point out the she isn’t human nor an elf but more of a nocturnal creature. That said, she is supposed to have slightly larger eyes than normal.

It is her eyes that are giving me trouble, one of them is wrong and I can quite put my finger on it. I think the one on the right is a tad too large compared to the other. Perhaps a second opinion would help me here.

Of course if you see something else in need of a little TLC please feel free to let me know.

Oh, her right hand (the one behind the thigh) may also need some attention. Agree?

This is my first post here (I think) F.I.Y
http://www.darkesthorizons.com/pub/Seductress2.jpg

Last thing, this is only the rough draft, hence the sketchy lines..

[liquidjack]

Actually, the eye problem is no big deal....noones eyes line up perfectly. I think the problem is with the facial bone structure. Her right cheekbone seems to go all the way to her temple.
- Her neck is manly thick
- It looks as if she is lifting both breast
- Her lower torso to her legs is painfully deformed. (use reference if possible)

I would suggest you just start over.....too many problems with the anatomy.....check out the link threads for anatomy and proportion.

[deathropolis]

I like it, i working on a similair creature as well, ( Blood elven seducer ) but i would pronounce her butt more, her belly-button is to low and i would work on some more attractive armor/clothes. Keep up the good work. :)

[_JRandall_]

seems kinda too closely cropped. ink it! there does seem to be serious problems with her breasts.

[Eytan]

great job, i think the right eye is at an odd angle compared to the left one, maybe move it and turn it slightly up.

Something you can do, copy the left side of her face, paste and flip horizontally, put the 2 together and you should see how her eyes need to be.

[Snakebyte]

LiquidJack: Actually I did use a reference for about 90% of the pose. What is different however (and may be the source of the problem) is that I changed the face/head ,her legs, and the hand behind her. The reference (Porn) stopped just below the navel so I added a little more…

Quick_Sketch: That is what I’m seeing as well, I’ll work on it.

As for her breast’s …well.. perhaps a little shading may help, That’s pretty much what she was doing in the reference and it look okay, I’ll see what I can do.
Fixing it shouldn’t be too difficult so starting over wont be necessary, I’ll work on the suggested area’s and update later tonight or tomorrow.

[Snakebyte]

Okay, here are two that may help (or hurt) and show what I kinda have in mind as far as lighting and background goes.
http://www.darkesthorizons.com/pub/Seductress3.jpg
http://www.darkesthorizons.com/pub/Seductress4.jpg
***NOTE: The rendering is just an idea and NOT quite what I have in mind, I dont think I like it too much but you get the idea****

All I did so far is adjust the eye and made the neck a little thinner.
The idea is to have two light sources, the primary being a bright moon from top right and then the ambient glow/reflections from the left.
Also, she is supposed to have wings but that will just have to be done in the final...


humm, yea, boob needs work ....dont know why, thats the way it was in the referance, perhaps its my lighting..