Grinner (updated and fixed)

[staylor]

Done in photoshop over way too long a time.
I hope to enter this in a contest so please comment on anything that could be improved.
Edit: I fixed up the mountains, his foot and gave him a shadow (can't believe I forgot that) so here's the new and improved version. Still feel free to comment on any possible problems.
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[Joey-b]

nice.. but there isnt really and shading in it very lil in anycase
maybe u could add some glow to it.. from the eyes and mouth and chest thingy..

but great work on the muscle structere and everything..

[Snowball]

hi, overall seems to be great work, but one thing that bothers me is the legs, moreso the feet area. They both seem to be lined up "almost" perfectly, which seemed to confuse my eye when it came to a foreground and background leg, if thats stated correctly lol. If someone else notices this then maybe you can explain better than I.;)

[pissant]

Hey, looks pretty good. The feet are directly in front of each other, though, so it does look a bit wierd, especially as one reads as being further back. And they're a bit flat on the ground: assuming he's walking, the back one would be raised slightly. Just walk around a bit and see what I mean. And he doesn't seem to be casting a shadow? Even so, I like the concept of freaky glowy thing inside. Keep it up, man.

[nick at night]

I love the creepy atmosphere you have going on. I agree with the above mentioned comments about the feet. I also noticed that it looks as though you spent a bit more time on the trees and the grass in the foreground, but the mountains look like they didn't have as much tought put into them.

[staylor]

I'd like to thank everyone for commenting on this piece. I fixed a few of the problems. The legs were tricky though, I didn't perfect them but at least the stance is better. I also filled in the gaping hole in the mountain. The updated picture should show up now.