Ink sketch

[daok]

Here is some of my draw, I accept any constructive comment;)

http://img74.photobucket.com/albums/v225/atripec/fille_fineliner_3.jpg

http://img74.photobucket.com/albums/v225/atripec/fille_fineliner_4.jpg

http://img74.photobucket.com/albums/v225/atripec/fille_fineliner_1.jpg

http://img74.photobucket.com/albums/v225/atripec/fille_fineliner_2.jpg

They are in the order that I prefer. All have been made with in inc with a FineLiner, no pen or eraser before so I couldn't erase some error but well tell me what you think.

[legacy]

hey daok,

your ink drawings are pretty good, but I think you could use some work on your jaw / mouth region. It seems that you have trouble proportioning them correctly to the rest of the head.

also, your eyes always seem to be at a downward slant. try making them more even across the face.

as van would probably say... www.saveloomis.org

you can find some great studies their.

hope to see more from you.
good luck :)