two concept sketches

[stilts]

http://free.one.picturehost.co.uk/Elf%20swordsman3.jpg
http://free.one.picturehost.co.uk/Elf%20Archer3.jpg

some suggestions if any? i did these for a BFV Mod called Elves and Goblins. Tell me what you think

**Edit** changed the resolution

[simmi]

Change the height and width of the images.

[stilts]

already did thx ;)

[stilts]

anyone????

[stilts]

bump

[toad]

I dare not comment after last time. *sheesh*

[stilts]

then why'd you post smart guy :rolleyes:

[SEVANS]

Be careful with your joints etc.

The twisting of the hands/forearm in the top pic look extremely uncomfortable.

And in the second pic, the way that the bow is held also appears awkward.

Little crits, but the hands are a very important piece of most images. Imagine that your holding those weapons, imagine the weight and what would feel like a comfortable and 'natural' way to hold them.

It's really close, but not quite there. A slight reworking would strengthen these images.

[stilts]

ya i was kinda uncomfortable with the hand positionings. Ill go back and fix them, then ill repost it. Thx for sharing

[aryul82]

Well in my opinion, I think the design isn't too bad. Its just whats under, rework the flow and structure of your character. Be loose at first and THEN detail the cool costume stuff. I agree with the hand position as well...practice drawing hands gripping weapons. In the end theres no secret to it, just practice a lot and get lots of photo references. Hope this helps!

[stilts]

thx man ill keep that in mind

[Sok N. Wett]

Good to see your still around.

[stilts]

thx man

[_JRandall_]

cool stuff I like the melee weapon.
keep drawing! try some dynamic poses maybe.