women on green check it !

[smabee]

this is something i did today while i was thinking of some paintings to do yep ok and i'm done :confused:


http://webspace.ringling.edu/~smabee/girlswportarit4web.jpg

[jasonarthur]

nice. I love her lips and the way her eyes aren't perfectly even (like a real human).

-- J

[SaIiLdVaEnR]

Something about the bottom of the nose bugs me. It was painted beautifully though.

Aidan

[Scratched Glass]

came out well bitch. id just check on the nostrils =P

[fukifino]

I think there are 2 things bugging about the bottom of the nose.

1) Each half of the nose is (usually) described as a concave surface providing two distinct bowls in which the nostrils rest. What you've drawn here is one large convex surface describing the entire bottom of the nose. Also, the nostrils are rather small (or perhaps placed too far forward) giving a large area of skin on the facial side that exaggerates this effect.

2) The bottom of the nose is also very dark...it's a good deal darker than its cast shadow and if you squint, it's one of the darkest areas on the face. I _think_ it might be too dark. Or perhaps it's too red (almost looks like she has a cold ;) ).

Of course, that's just what it looks like to me (mind you I'm a very new student to this, so take it with a grain of salt).

Beyond that it's a gorgeous picture. I love the very soft quality to the painting and it's a nice color choice with the background/foreground.

[imglue]

dude you didnt tell me about this one!!

i like it, except her ethnicity isnt very defined which is ok by me but she looks like a very mixed lady, but thats cool . hope you havin fun at work.

[smabee]

thanks for all of the input guys it is greatly needed
i'm trying:D

[I0N]

I like it. no, I love it! no, I fu... never mind. what did you use PS or painter. how long?

[smabee]

PAINTER 8 2 HOURS OR SO

[Loga4]

Beautiful!Well done!