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[Batteram]

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[sin]

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[John P.]

Originally posted by Batteram
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Hmmm.....yes....I see your point.




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[Fozzybar]

Ok...that's a start, batteram...as you posted this in the help-section, i'll give you some crits:

The composition is boring

More depth and contrast maybe

Where is the focus?

Try to fill the whole medium, not just the first pixel...

You are on a good way...keep it up!

I hope you don't mind...i overpainted your pic to show you some suggestions:



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Looks better now i think...

[sin]

fozz, you really are my hero, 10 points!

[Lono]

i hope you dont mind that i did a repaint of your repaint.
i think this piece needs tits.

... (.)(.)

there... now its perfect.

the Biz would be proud.

-Lono

[Fozzybar]

Lono, I DO MIND!

I think posting someones art in a forum without the artist's permission AND overpainting it is one of the worst things you can do on a forum!

BTW the tits are anatomically off...

[Lono]

what are you talking about man?!? i changed over 75 percent of it.. that means its MINE now!!!!!:devil1:

and heres my latest piece.. its my opus.

....(.)(..)

note, the superfluous nipple..

pure genious.

-Lono

[Coma]

Lmao!