Sketches from a N00B!

[.cfb]

There is a back-story behind these: I'm supposed to be doing a comic book in Cartooning, but have a problem: I don't have characters! Well, my comic does, but I don't have the required "concept" drawings of them (She acts like its a big serious project, like it's gunna be published or something, which it definatly won't, cuz I'm a shitty drawer *sigh*). Anyways, I just pulled out some sketches from a while ago, inked them (I can't ink either :(), and layed them out as my "charcters." The last one is just a light sketch that I did in histroy (It has horrible anatomy, and doesn't have ANY style at all). Here they are: I'd appreciate some C&C so that I can improve.

http://www.imagemagician.com/images/counterfeitbaco/Lg_1.jpg
http://www.imagemagician.com/images/counterfeitbaco/Lg_2.jpg
http://www.imagemagician.com/images/counterfeitbaco/Lg_3.jpg
http://www.imagemagician.com/images/counterfeitbaco/Lg_4.jpg
http://www.imagemagician.com/images/counterfeitbaco/untitled.JPG

Yes, I know that her arm looks flat! :mad: ARGH!

[Sammy]

stop your whinin' .. 'cause it looks to me like you can draw out the wazoo..
I really like your style...... it's very moving and dark... I'd even like to see more lines goin everywhere loose like you do it...

yea her arms are flat like you said .. but if you'd like some advice you should look at a lot of things with foreshortening.. and just plain make her hands larger..

the characters are very nice and fit your style perfectly I thing.. espesially that last little sketch..

I wanna see more of your stuff.. just draw it this time thinkin' that you're "Bad-Ass" and not "shitty-drawer"..