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I.was.ink
December 15th, 2002, 04:03 PM
I already post this in my little thumbnails exercise (http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=2317), but I also like it as a finished piece so I'm posting it in here.:)

http://members.fortunecity.com/iwasink/david.jpg

Hope moderators don't get mad.

C & C Please!:D

I.was.ink
December 16th, 2002, 08:52 PM
can someone please say something.:(

davi
December 16th, 2002, 09:16 PM
very nice and artsy. I think if you want it to be a finished piece you should take alittle more time on the back aleast, seems a bit like mud as it is now.

daarken
December 16th, 2002, 09:16 PM
i think it looks pretty good. you did a good job in showing form on the face. i would say pay more attention to the nostrils. look to see how they really are, and how they wrap around themselves. The shadow on the scapula is a little confusing, because it looks like there is a big dent there, when actually the scapula is convex.

Oblio
December 17th, 2002, 08:45 AM
how dare you??? :D
moderator oblio loves it!!! Thank you!

Oblio

Zatransis
December 17th, 2002, 09:46 AM
That is totally rad! I love the simplicity in the lighting and the wonderful angle you chose. The unfinished look seems to pull it together in my opinion.

I.was.ink
December 17th, 2002, 04:11 PM
Thanks Zatranis, I agree. It was just a study, by the way, but I also could finish it.