Concept Art : Flying Passenger Boat

[Pene Menn]

Concept Art : Flying Passenger Boat ( for personal SF project )
Tools : Photoshop, Painter

http://www.penemenn.com/bbs/data/concept/flying_passenger_boat_w.jpg



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http://www.penemenn.com/flying_passenger_boat_w2.jpg

[dCepT]

Beautiful painting, man!
I think maybe the light side of her face might benefit from a little red. Like you've done on the arms on the robot.

But other than that, beatiful piece!

d-C

[Groover McNab]

Wow! The detail on this thing is crazy. I don't really see anything I can crit. Great work!

[Ezekiel]

wow. the detail is truly breathtaking. I love all the oriental hints on the design. And the sheer size of the 'boat' from that corridor...

[strych9ine]

Beautiful painting, man!
I think maybe the light side of her face might benefit from a little red. Like you've done on the arms on the robot.

But other than that, beatiful piece!

:D
9ine

[OLSEN]

Beautiful painting, man!
I think maybe the light side of... errr..

I haven´t got any crits for you, except that i prefer the cropped closeup, it feels more personal somehow. And that the background may be a bit too saturated, but i´m not 100% sure about that.

Anyhow, great work, i really like this piece.

[RAMÓN]

Awesome piece of work. I love the lighting.

[kyliegirl]

very nice work i love it :)

[Summer Pudding]

Oh man, that's gorgeous. You're understanding of the properties of light is impressive.

[Pene Menn]

Wow~ how many C&C are~!!

I really agree with you such as
" I think maybe the light side of her face might benefit from a little red. Like you've done on the arms on the robot. ",
" i prefer the cropped closeup, it feels more personal somehow ", " the background may be a bit too saturated,"

dCepT, Groover McNab, Ezekiel, strych9ine, OLSEN, RAM?, kyliegirl
I really thank you all~ ^^

[Pene Menn]

Summer Pudding ~ i have visited your site a few days ago. you have many great artworks~!! i really like them~!!
Thank you very much for your comment. :)

[Aerythes]

Very inventive concept. Don't see much oriental stuff here. I really like the girl; she looks so contented standing there clutching her pretty fan :)

[sonofangron]

wow! I like the sky; makes me think it's in some alien world. And the shadows from the rail. :)

[Pene Menn]

Aerythes, sonofangron ~ thank you very much ~!!! :)

[SaIiLdVaEnR]

I would put some reddish highlights or tints on the fan, just because the entire atmosphere around it is reds and pinks and the white should pick up some of those.

Aidan

[Loga4]

Excellent work,Pene Menn!
Details are awesome!

[Titan]

Nice painting, no crits....very professional:)

[Pene Menn]

SaIiLdVaEnR, Loga4, Titan ~

wow ~ thank you very much for your comments and crits ~!!! :)

[Pene Menn]

This is another cropped image.

http://www.penemenn.com/bbs/data/concept/flying_passenger_boat_w_.jpg

[makotierra]

Nice job. I think the robot and the bag of flowers should be darkened because there's no sunlight hitting them directly, so they would be lit from light reflecting off of the hardwood floor. Being only lit from reflected light off the floor would create a very warm, soft, low-value light whereas in the picture, the robot reaches values of white, and considering how dark the brown of the bag is, it feels too light also. Looking at lighting direction, it also feels like the robot is getting hit from sunlight from the left of the image, but based on the shadows on the floor, the sun must be relatively high up in the sky still (which also makes me wonder if the city's regular sky color is red because the image feels very sunset-like...also the increase in saturation in the atmosphere in the city makes it feel like sunset. If it's not sunset, I imagine things in the distance would become less saturated as they're further away.) Other than those things, which i'm not actually 100% sure on, it's a pretty nice piece, and I can tell you definitely put a lot of time into it.

[Pene Menn]

makotierra ~ good crits~!! :)

Thank you very much for your comments and crits ~!!! :)