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HYBRID187
May 23rd, 2004, 04:37 AM
just a sequential for the comic idol comic
http://www.renderosity.com/photos/ArtistArticle8222.jpg
Luke Mrozek
May 23rd, 2004, 08:16 AM
This is very nicelly executed page, layout, imho, is good and now i would like to see it in color!
ZeroWave
May 23rd, 2004, 02:12 PM
I think you would get a better snse of motion in the last 2 frames if you pulled out more..and showed off more of the character(s)...having just the motion lines in medium close-up makes them look to static.
HYBRID187
May 23rd, 2004, 03:21 PM
thanx for the input guys and yeah i agree on the bad crop for those panels ill keep that in mind for the next page