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RipperMcGuirl
December 14th, 2002, 04:05 PM
This is an NPC from an RPG campaign that I'm running...It's basically a ref. drawing for myself. I'll be doing the rest of his squad as well.
http://members.cox.net/ripper106/Pics/SgtJones.jpg
funK
December 14th, 2002, 04:18 PM
nice shading, and the form is good, but hes a bit stiff,
he will be known as stiffy to i.

funK, over
RipperMcGuirl
December 14th, 2002, 07:36 PM
Yeah, he's not really supposed to be in action...it's pretty much just so I could describe what he looked like.
The_Dude_Abidin
December 15th, 2002, 04:47 PM
I have to agree, the character is stiff. A character does not have to be in action to have and interesting natural pose. The stiff comment was more geared to the point of it looking unnatuarl in its positioning. He has no shifted weight or movement in the form itself. The charaacter has no real gesture to it. I have to agree with this comment as well. The underlying character concept is good but it needs to be refined a little more. stance says alot about a character and therefore is important in concept.