Sequential Pages

[Silver Sehkmet]

Final project for one of my classes was to do pencil a few sequential pages. So here they are; some silly story where I fight my roommate over the merits of the villains vs. the heroes.

I don't own Spiderman or anything in the Marvel universe and I don't claim to, so don't sue me. :) You know how you draw something and you're proud of it for a while until you realize you could do much better the next go around? Oh well. Hope you find something constructive to say about it.

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[WildSpruceMoose]

Everyone knows Spiderman's web dissolves after a couple hours =D Just kidding. I liked it, nice having the parallel stories in it. I thought it was funny and laughed a couple times.

[Carnifex]

good art and funny story. only thing that bugs me is the scene where spidey hits octopus, he seems incredibly weak regarding his arm muscles.

[SeraphSword]

My question is: how does the blond girl know spider-man's real name?(page 1, panel 3)

[Silver Sehkmet]

The story is not set in any particular universe, so I guess it doesn't matter how she knew. Although if I had to pick one I'd say the Ultimate Spiderman series. Just about everyone and their mother knows who Spiderman is in that one. :rolleyes:

Carnifex - Yeah, but I didn't want to draw Spiderman too muscular since he's still a teen, really. He knocks the crap out of villains all the time though. ;)

[Hazart]

It was fun and well done. Hahaha! Keep it up!