First noob's topic...( 21/05/2004 )

[Has]

Hi everyone, I'm new here and I'm very scared of posting in those topics cause you all have an amazing style (o_O) !!!
(Sorry for the spelling, but my English is bad... I speak French).
I'm posting some characters,... are they good, or they sucks? :?
Critics & comments are welcome.
Thanks forward (^_^)

http://membres.lycos.fr/hassassin/croquis%20071.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/hassassin/croquis%20062.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/hassassin/croquis%20081.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/hassassin/croquis%20t1.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/hassassin/croquis%20142.jpg

[Jane Radstrom]

Hi, these look pretty nice. A few of the sketches are wonky, but the more finished ones look overall very nice. It's hard to tell if they are "good characters" or not, though. There is not much variation in expression, and, being just heads I don't know anything about the time or place these people live, their goals, their history... So I would say they aren't really characters, yet. How about some full body shots? :) By the way, welcome to CA! ;)

[MuffinMan]

uhh......can't stand blocky faces, your male faces need work..not all males look like a fricken model.

[Has]

thank you for your comments :)
I'll do my best to correct what's wrong. I'll post some sketches with full body and clothings (^_^)
See you.

[Schlo-mo]

I like your stuff, nice and clean. I wouldnt pay attention to muffinman, your male faces are quality and I think they look well constructed.

[MuffinMan]

shlo-mo...pay more attention...i meant that not all guys look like that..i mean some are chubby-faced, or thin and bony, or deformed. you know what i mean? i was suggestingto draw more variety of faces not the same faces. the faces are well constructed but need more variety. seeing the same face get's kinda boring don't you agree?

[Schlo-mo]

Although i do agree with that, the way I percieved it was Has was attempting to draw the same character in a variety of angles and different style of hair. I may be wrong but ( from what I can see) I think he is skillful enough to whip out drawings which are infact different people or characters.

Sorry for the misunderstanding but the way you said 'uhh......can't stand blocky faces, your male faces need work' led me to believe it wasnt just the variety shown but the actual drawings.

[MuffinMan]

hmmmm...very good.
let's see some more drawings!

[Has]

Thanks for your comments :)

There'e others sketches:



http://membres.lycos.fr/hassassin/croquis%20151.jpg

http://membres.lycos.fr/hassassin/croquis%20161.jpg

http://membres.lycos.fr/hassassin/06b.jpg

[MuffinMan]

try not to add to much detail to the moth of the guys ou draw, like for the upper lip...loosen it up abit...looks too tight.

[Dullahan]

I completely agree with muffin man
:chug:

[Has]

Thx for your comments
Here's some others:

http://membres.lycos.fr/hassassin/croquis%2021.jpg

For these 2, is it better with or without speed line? :?

http://membres.lycos.fr/hassassin/technique1.jpg http://membres.lycos.fr/hassassin/technique2.jpg

A fan-art of Wolvi^^
http://membres.lycos.fr/hassassin/08a.jpg

>MuffinMan: Sorry but I made this sketch before I saw your comment about the lip :(

[MuffinMan]

that's okay....anyway your getting much better! keep it up! wolverine looks good...when you draw the lips just draw the line where both lip meet...you know what i mean? then just shade where ever adn that may make it more realistic...depending on how you draw them...keep trying:D

[ElvisMcVegas]

nice logan...not wolverine....wolverine is him with his mask on