joan of arc

[Travis_Bourbeau]

this was just a 5minute sketch that i used when practicing painting one of my first trys at doing a painting showing up pretty damn dark here for some reason! I just stoped cuase i didnt realy know where to go next, it needs contrast for sure but as far as choosing a light source and doing the armor im kinda lost ?


if anyone would care to do a pintover or simple advice its welcom again this is a month old from when i started so a few things ive learned like blocking in color etc http://equinoxx.cgcommunity.com/temp/7/pouting_girl_2.jpg


thanks to eq at mcw studios for hosting

[Travis_Bourbeau]

http://equinoxx.cgcommunity.com/temp/7/pouting_girl.jpg just a lighter version

[sin]

thats rocks my socks, i love it!

[Travis_Bourbeau]

Hmm thank you very much! There are actauly tons of mistakes in the poprtions of it the arm band and arm chest and face could be diffrent /bigger so i was only posting for paint help but aparently it just sucks haha oh well thought id at least try to get some tips !



cheers

[John P.]

I really really like what you've got so far, so I did a quick photoshop job to give you some pointers to what I think you could do.

Just use it as some kind of guide(although this paint-over isn't perfect either).

I changed the hands, sword(if that's what it was supposed to be), chest/stomach, legs, arm, and added a different background.

Although I'm not such a hot artist, I hope it at least can give you some pointers. :)

Her left hand really stinks in my version, I just had to do a quick one.


http://home.online.no/~johmoe/images/pouting_girl_3.jpg