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mephistophyls
May 14th, 2004, 11:31 PM
i drew it first, then scanned then coloured. i know how OFF the anatomy is...:bash: i dunno, when i sketched it, it just was so WILD i didn't want to change the style. other than that... CRITIQUES!

http://img48.photobucket.com/albums/v148/zoekills/das.jpg

sandrue
May 15th, 2004, 02:36 AM
you're right about the anatomy is off:D other than that you nedd a bit more fo a shading. it look flat in most places right now...

:chug:

Epoch
May 15th, 2004, 12:03 PM
Very cool idea i think.
But i would suggest furthering the shading on her human parts, particularly the midsection, they look flat to me. Also i would suggest tweaking darkness and highlights on the electronic parts of her that show through. Also, the pure Black inside of her (her left shoulder) kinda seems bland, I would suggest lightening that up a lil, and suggest further electronics inside of her. Anyway, i think this is a way cool concept with an interesting style, i would love to see it finished

mephistophyls
May 15th, 2004, 08:03 PM
thanks! shading and fill ins... okay will do!
anymore? :D

mephistophyls
May 15th, 2004, 11:34 PM
i drew the first post about a year ago. i'm gonna start from scratch with this new one done today. better anatomy btw. pasted the big face on the little body in photoshop. :p gonna try to paint it now... that the part i'm NOT good at.
http://img48.photobucket.com/albums/v148/zoekills/century.jpg

I'm going to continue this post in Work In Progress!