Black Noir

[Matt Smith]

This is a pinup piece of a character for a comic I am working on with a few other artist. It is basically just a pin up sketch. The only thing that I can see that bothers me is that my hat looks alittle off center, for the most part though, I really like it. C&C is welcome and appreciated. Thanks.

http://www.mattksmith.com/MarkhamPinup1.jpg


It seems darker on the internet than it does in photoshop for some reason, that is a first for me.....?!?!?!

[gauss]

strong use of lighting, well rendered. my trouble with this piece is that there's not really anything that distinguishes this character particularly, especially if it's for a comic.

also, you are aware that 'noir' means black, so your topic read 'black black' ? :)