a new bunch

[mime]

30 minuts acrylic
http://erhnam.free.fr/life_11_1.jpg

same pose, 1 minut
http://erhnam.free.fr/life_11_1b.jpg

10 minuts
http://erhnam.free.fr/life_11_2.jpg

2 minuts
http://erhnam.free.fr/life_11_3.jpg
http://erhnam.free.fr/life_11_4.jpg
http://erhnam.free.fr/life_11_5.jpg
http://erhnam.free.fr/life_11_6.jpg
http://erhnam.free.fr/life_11_7.jpg
http://erhnam.free.fr/life_11_8.jpg


i think I'm still improving, the lines are much more confidents in those one (especially the 2 minuts poses) than the other weeks (except maybe for the drawings on yellow BG from last week)

please share your crits and comments

[I.was.ink]

Yeah, way to go. Its good to see your improving. Try being more confident with your lines. In my opion. I think you're going to slow. Try capturing the pose with one line from the head to the toe first thing your do. In 1-2 secs. 3 tops. Torso shape as a quick shaper, pelvis and then limbs. U seem to be doing a great job. I love that first one. Its my faveeee.......:D


My fave of the 2 min. bunch is the fifth one. In these short poses try and catch the essence of the pose. It doesn't even have to look like the person. I like that one because of that shadow. good job

Hope my suggestions worked out for u. Just keep it up and keep em coming.:thumbsup:

[Big_O]

The acrylic picture is very good, almost perfect.

[JoshuaTheJames]

i love the paint application...

-Joshua

[mime]

thanxs a lot guys, i'm trying each week to improve, and to listen to your advices :)

i'm honoured by your comments, especially from you joshua, since you are one of the artists here i admire a lot.

[jester]

You must spend hours in life drawing classes - I love your drawings very much. Is it acrylics or gouache on that paper (which I like to use, too)?

Jester