ozf5

[jrr]

:hello!: hi guys here's two illustrations i did for ozf5.com

hope you guys like it. this is my take on the ozf5 characters. visit their site!

http://www.sleepisevil.com/~jrtistic/images/tinmanpaint.jpg
http://www.sleepisevil.com/~jrtistic/images/dorothy.jpg

[John P.]

First of all, I'd like to say I think there's something seriously strange about this forum... There are 1500 members, I see a list of people viewing this page every time I'm here, but still I see threads like this go to 50, maybe 100 views before anyone comments!
Hello!! Is it so hard to give a little feedback? Doesn't have to be very constructive or negative if you don't feel like it, you can just say you like it if you do, and preferably what you like. Or if you don't like it, state it and say why. It's not uncommon to see threads having 500+ views and only maybe 10 comments.... Come on!

Ok, to the post....(sorry 'bout that...)

I think the second one is really good, nothing negative to add there from me. Well, maybe a little bit of nitpicking; the front of the barrel of the gun(the nuzzle? My english isn't good enough for this...) is maybe a little off axis so to speak; maybe move that whole chunk at the tip half a mm lower. Again, nitpicking.

The first one is also great, I really like the concept. But IMO there's something not 100% right about his legs. Since it's a robot, he should be more symmetrical so that both legs are the same(the joints at the hips and such).

Sorry, sometimes my english isn't what it should be. :(

That's the best description I could give at the mo.

Nice work overall, both of them. :)

[piGfreeZer]

alright so I reply :p
(i'm NOT that good in drawing, so I don't usually post any critiques...in front of "master" like you :o )

I just think the first one is a bit flat, maybe because of the background.. And the girl's face seems more detailed than the rest of the body, which seems... cartoony (btw, it made me think about the game on dreamcast... can't remember the name but...)