Spider-man

[Spidey-man]

I have been working on this. I still have a few things to work out, like a background, touch-ups, the webs but other than that what do you all think?

http://img21.photobucket.com/albums/v62/spidey-man/ca909c80.jpg

[Eytan]

Awsome, the legs could use a little more definition and with that comes more shading on them, good job tho.

[shortmikeshort]

Not so bad. The problems you pointed out are right on. You should think about background at the same time as the character. Spidey exists within an environment, he relates to it. If you draw one in after you pose him he may look pasted in. Ditto on the legs as problem areas, and also the waist. He has a willowy supermodel's waist.

What I do like, though, is that you've got a pretty good classic Spidey pose going.

[Epoch]

not bad. however i've got 2 suggestions for you :) First off, his head is a little bit large.. and ovular. This is not necessarily bad tho :D Second, the main action Spidey seems to be doing is centered on his upper body. His neck, shoulders, and arms seem very dynamic. But his legs seem to be casually dangling. Anyway, hope my 2 cents helped

[Spidey-man]

Thanks, every bit helps. I need to work on my legs more, I have been focusing on arms lately hopefully I will eventually get them down. Thanks again.

[skid]

great drawing, you said your mistakes very well, but i think that the head is a bit weird.:googley: