View Full Version : Would love a look-over
October 23rd, 2011, 05:30 PM
I know it's not quite right, but can't see what it is. Could I get a few tips on what's keeping this from achieving professional level? Is is the form of the figure? Is it due to the inking?
Thank you so much,
October 23rd, 2011, 10:50 PM
I am not that solid with figures but I can give you some feedback anyway. 1st off this is looking cool ! I think the inking is solid.
Feedback- I think her pose could use some contrapposto. I think if she was standing the way she is then the left side of her Pelvis would be tilted up. Keeping in mind that this is the weight bearing leg. Also her right breast seems a bit off bc it is facing the exact way as the opposite breast when i believe it should be facing more towards the outter part of her body Bc of gravity and the way it attaches to the body. Just my 2 cents. Goodluck and anyone plz correct me if i am wrong.
November 1st, 2011, 04:12 PM
I'm not really the one to critique this piece but I think her pose is unatural, it's like she isn't keeping her balance. Have you been drawing from a model a lot?
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