Insect queen - critiques welcome

[killersquirrelz]

Wasn't quite sure where to stick this...

Anyway I'd enjoy hearing some feedback on this piece. I've stared at it for too long and need some fresh eyes. Lemme know what you think works and what doesn't.

http://www.untameduniverse.net/temp/insect-queen.jpg

[Fozzybar]

killersquirrelz, i think, everything works! Very nice one...

The only thing...booohhh - we knew, this would come :D -...the only thing, i said, ....is the slime coming out of his mouth. You whether should draw it over his arm or let it end before touching the arms. Currently this part isn't easy to figure, what's going on...

[ne obchod]

ooh i like this piece. i gotta agree with ole fozz about the drool though, it looks rather ambiguous.
i can picture it oozing across my dirty bathroom floor making wet noises. *sppurlch ruuloush spoush*

[killersquirrelz]

I totally agree with you about the drool, Fozzy. However, since you mentioned it, I'm going to have to let her lay eggs in your ear tonight while you're sleeping.


Kidding aside, thanks for the critique, guys!

[Sammy]

That looks great.. I think it all works........

you should just check the backgrounds when you do them.. see the strokes goin in a different direction over to the left...
keep all the strokes goin in the same direction... this is a very little thing but can be distracting if not done right..

but the creature does look great..

[Sammy]

Did I say "left"??? I meant "other left"



!!!!TOUCH FUZZY GET DIZZY!!