Widescreen Slab City

[treeshark]

A quick visualisation for a cgi set, all pshop in about an on hour and a half.
http://www.treeshark.com/images/draw/slabcity.jpg

[riq]

I like it!!

You could desaturate the blue in some places and keep your strongest hues for you focal point.

And I think it would help if you used a wider range of yellow,orange, and brown since you do have a warm light source coming from the sky.

riq.

[Groover McNab]

I think this is great. Especially for an hour and a half. Only thing I would suggest is more of a distinction between the foreground and background. They look a little too similar imho.

[treeshark]

This was done as demo for guys who light and make cgi sets. I stopped at the end of the session! Here's a adjusted one taking your crits into account.
http://www.treeshark.com/images/draw/slab2.jpg