October 4th, 2011, 03:19 PM
This one came from nowhere...Some kind of temple I think...
I had lot of fun with this peace!
Hope you like it!
C&C are welcome
October 4th, 2011, 09:05 PM
Here are somethings that stood out to me
1. Try to avoid using black, make it have some color, that will bring some life to the very black foreground.
2.I know that the temple is the focus but the foreground and the midground (trees) needs to be more defined and better drawn. Right now it seems abstract and blurry.
3. You did a good job of pushing back the temple and creating depth by making it lighter and a bit desaturated.
4. The focal point, which is the temple, is being distracted by the very bright light on the top left corner. You can make the light the focal point, better yet a way to bring the viewers eye to the temple by bringing the light towards the center of the painting.
BTW this kind of post may get more replies if you post it under the Critique section.
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