Sylvan Ranger

[LeeSmith]

As all the advice and suggestions I have recieved in the past have been so help ful I figure I might aswell keep posting stuff and hopefully improving as a result of your help.

Here's another B+W ink illustration for Promised Sands by Bbrack Productions. My main focus in this one was to get more action into the scene and use more solid blacks for both composition and to define forms. I also forced myself to use a brush for most of the image, something I'm not sure if it has improved the results or not?

http://www.shawawa.com/misc/syl_ranger.jpg

Let me know what you think :)

[I.was.ink]

well it looks nice, but I don't get that sense of action you want. Is he floating or standing I can't tell. It looks like he's going to shoot at the viewer, but I think if the pose was a bit different, to empasize action, then maybe we could see that its an action scene.