The Vanquish Dreams

[JCEvil]

http://gallery.cybertarp.com/albums/userpics/19388/progress1.jpg

been coloring this for hours... need people to point out things i missed
im still workin on it as we speak

FIRE UP UR COMMENTS PLZ~~

[wallychairmover]

i like the mood you're portraying here, i think a little more of a shadow being cast against the wall on the right would strengthen that mood, and a little more crispe definition of shapes on the robot guy would help..and reflect some of the flesh color of the girl on the robots crotch where her arm is resting, just sublty, right now they seem kind of seperate..and make the drapery a little more dramatic..but we'll see once you get along more since you are coloring it as you speak:D tally ho!