Lea

[feeblepenguin]

http://img19.photobucket.com/albums/v58/feeblepenguin/Lea.jpg


Hey everyone, here is my newest photoshop painting
tell me what you think
as always i welcome harsh criticism and any suggestions on how to improve the piece
thanks
Ali

*as a side note, i named her Lea because it also means grassy medow, wich was was what i was abstracting when painting the background

[Groover McNab]

I like it. Although I'm not sure what those red squarish things on the bottom are supposed to be.

[Bradart]

looks like mononoke. For some reason the speeder/ship/car/bike/futuremobile looks unfinished, but thats just one idiots opinion

[the good war]

is the perspective in the seat near the crotch correct? i really really like it but i don't see where the colors on the exhaust\whatever(tusk looking thing) in the front is coming from mostly the strong blue
i would say add a strong highlight to make the color look as is if it were another substance or lessen the strength of the blue
maybe touch up the forground a bit
thumbs up

[Aerythes]

Nice, but I think you need to add more flesh to her thighs.

[Rimshot]

I really like the coloring technique, but in some areas it looks almost too choppy, like the strokes arent confident enough or need to be tightened. Also her posture is stiff like shes not moving, but the image/background seems to suggest movement. It just feels like she should be in a more active position. Other than that its a cool painting. I especially like the colors and details in her headdress.

[jgillman]

I think it is a very well put together peice. However, (i try to do this in my own work) i try to stray away rfom outlining things too much, although i admire your almost cartooning style, i think would benefit you do get rid of the outline. Also her body is a little (just a little) dis proportionate, (look at her hips, they are a little awckward). This is a fast painting and i love the colors.