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pibb991
December 8th, 2002, 11:37 PM
http://www.arches.uga.edu/~evnmd/ashlee.jpg

the picture is a little fuzzy..

John P.
December 9th, 2002, 05:48 AM
Very nice work, I like it.

It looks to be pretty photorealistic, although I haven't seen the original photo/model.

Only criticism would be that to me, there's something a bit "wrong" with her right eye(to the left on the drawing to us).

Can't really put my finger on it...

Plus it seems the face is sloping slightly down from upper right to lower left, but at the same time doesn't...?


Take a look at it in a mirror, or flip it horisontally in an image editing program, and you'll probably see it.

Could be that you're pretty spot on though; hard to tell without having seen the model/photo.


But hey.... This is still really good! :)

I.was.ink
December 9th, 2002, 02:24 PM
Yeah it does look nice. Only thing I would recommend is to make the darkest part darker. But then again because of the fuzziness. the darkest parts are darker.

ChadTHX1138
December 9th, 2002, 07:09 PM
Nice work, you have alot of good life drawings in your folio.

The_Dude_Abidin
December 11th, 2002, 02:04 AM
Nice rendering here. Someone before mentioned a problem he/she had with the girls right eye(left on the drawing) the only problem is that the eyes is dropped down to low. The line of the eyes slant but the nose and mouth do not. If the eyes were set in that way the other two were slant similarly. I am nit picking at it though. I figure people post more for constructive crit rather than praise. I do however give you credit for a great deal of drawing and rendering ability in this portrait.

The Dude

pibb991
December 11th, 2002, 09:47 AM
yeah the right eye is off proportion a bit. thanks for the crits. the big lebowski rules

amphex
December 11th, 2002, 06:58 PM
Very nice work!
Sure the right eye is a bit annoying, but other than that the face is very well constructed =)