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talos72
December 8th, 2002, 10:47 PM
There once lived a race of warrior simians...

http://members.cox.net/arasht72/monkey%20mayhem%20revised.jpg

tyboogie
December 8th, 2002, 11:50 PM
cooool--boogie like.

my 2 cents-- i think it would be amore effective pic if you chose more of a focul point --im torn between the top and bottom. Personally id make the bottom warrior the focus --give him more detail and attention--and make the top a little less vibrant--so its more of a device to add to his character these could be subtle changes--also

the monkey in the top that is more brown than th eothers is getting stabbed by his "so called friend"

and the flat purple color behind bottom character is too flat

good work--keep it up

talos72
December 9th, 2002, 12:58 AM
cool, you were right....I thought there may be a conflicting center of interest between foreground and BG. So I knocked the BG guys back a bit and added some texture to the mound. Thanks

I.was.ink
December 9th, 2002, 01:02 AM
yeah nice piece. I like the guys in the back more than the monkey up front. IT's just my prefference. Nice allaround though.

Hey can u crit my piece in my post where it says prett girl...

talos72
December 9th, 2002, 01:06 AM
hehe, just don't tell the guy in the front that! :rolleyes:

Loga4
December 9th, 2002, 06:36 PM
Hey,TAlos,very nice!
Bad ass monkeys you got there,
good jop.