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[TomRipley]

so poor job:crazy: :crosseyed http://www.fwnd.com/bbs/UploadFile/2004-4/200442712513752345.jpg

the finger is so bad¡£¡£¡£

[jgillman]

I think you are trying a little too hard. Lossen up a little bit and just let the pencil marks flow from your head to the page, dont let your hand get in the way. I think you started doing that with the hair, i love the hair. Keep it up. (I know its not actually pencil, but its just easier to generalize).

[TomRipley]

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[evolve]

those eyes are real nice, too. but don't do the outlining, do shading of the form first. the outline is way to overworked.

[TomRipley]

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