42

[jfb]

http://www.jf-bruckner.com/images/speed/42.jpg

[brkofdon]

i like the texture and color, but im confused on what is going on here? so the guy in front is just standing there, while some ninja like guys are coming to attack him?

does he know that these guys are coming but doesn't want to show it til they come real close and then he busts out a kick ass move and knocks those ninja guys out?? haha i dunno what im talkin about?

whats the story behind this? is there a reason we cant see his eyes?

[geoffd]

it's the meaning of life

[young paddy1]

a hitchhiker fan above me I see, from the look of it the two behind him are all that's left of a force he's already kicked the crap out of,
Nnnice










watch the fast show you'll know what I mean

[Bradart]

i like the idea (but after reading the other replies i have started to question what that is), but the composition is too comfortable and stable. left=trees&ninja dead center=guy right=trees&ninja ......the composition itself has no ideas. asymetry is good, but it is also bad. i hope i havent confused you.

[Bammer]

I like it. I fear the title of this peice will get more feedback than the actualy peice (bring your towel.). But I like the way you draw. I even dig the boring composition that leaves you guessing about what's going on.

[jfb]

Thanks all, I've made some minor changes on the pic.
The story? I let you imagine what will happening next.
He will turn back and crush them all, he's already dead, these 2 guys are with him....
ehehe I like to hear the differents version that you see, it is very stimulating for me. Thanks.

http://www.jf-bruckner.com/images/speed/42a.jpg

[Casman]

Hmm, maybe it's a stoner, and those two ninjas are a result of the combination of too much THC in his blood and a very large capability of imaginating stuff :D

Nice work (especcialy colouring)


( sorry for the spelling, i'm European ;) )

[requiem]

that's great. I dont think the composition is too bad at all. a bit of symmetry is alright some times. I'd have to say i'm a big fan of your gestural style. The sketchy style seems to indicate that this was done quickly. How long did it actually take you?

[Pigeon]

i like the aggressive angular linework - it brings action and tension to the otherwise still figure, tying him to the active background. I like the colors too.