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June 7th, 2011, 10:45 PM
Hi, my name is Oliver Lazic and this is my second post. My goal is to break into the comic book industry and work as a penciler or simply work on different concept ideas. These are some of my penciled samples.
Any feedback would help.
Thanks in advance.
June 9th, 2011, 03:19 AM
Really nice work.
June 9th, 2011, 04:39 PM
Hey, thanks Random Hobo. I'm glad you like them!
June 9th, 2011, 11:46 PM
Could you post the pictures in the actual thread? It would make it a lot easier to give you crit so I don't have to go back and forth and try and enlarge each one.
In general the legs on your figures aren't quite long enough. Most comics depict figures with extraordinarily long legs for that hero effect, so it wouldn't hurt to exaggerate the proportions a little.
I like them. Thanks for posting.
June 16th, 2011, 05:23 PM
I liked your drawings. Two things I can point out.
I think you should continue the study of anatomy and proportion, since some off your figures a little bit off, especially their legs and the sides of the torso (the depiction of the seratus anterior and ribcage looks odd.)
The second thing is use value in order to really make your work make an impact.
June 26th, 2011, 04:20 PM
Well there's a bunch of over worked muscle tone with no attention to functional anatomy for starters. Honestly your composition skill aren't half bad. If you have ideas for a comic, design some pages.
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