Cyborg Evoc Finished ( need tips on anatomy)

[dmo0113]

hi you Guys! this is my first thread and I made A cyborg few days ago but I need some tips on Anatomy!! If you want to correct my mistakes please do in Photoshop with a Red Brush! And upload it here so that i can correct it again! check it and Please Rate it and let me know what you think of it on Deviantart Or here!!

Dmo0113.devianart.com

Thank u!

[nonameowns]

first of all, wrong section to post. The correct place will be the critique section. Here is for tutorials.


Neat character design but it can be dramatically improved. The pose is stiff, not loose. Also there are proportion issue as seen in the thighs, the man's left breast, and its left arm. Simple perspective would help fix this.

Now, to enhance the excitement, the pose need to be dynamic. For example, jumping in the air with the cannon charging up pointing the viewer with the view level near on the ground. That makes a interesting image and something to look at.

look around here, plenty of tutorials to learn the above.