"Mech Angel" sketches developed

[feeblepenguin]

http://img19.photobucket.com/albums/v58/feeblepenguin/mechangel_donerough_smallwithblackborder.jpg

http://img19.photobucket.com/albums/v58/feeblepenguin/mechangel2small.jpg

http://img19.photobucket.com/albums/v58/feeblepenguin/girlmechangel.jpg

hey everyone here are some worked up sketches of this character piece that i probably never should have taken past the initial line work, tell me what you think and please be harsh with your critiques, thanks

my more finished character pieces:


"Chloe" and "Nema" (http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?threadid=21671)

i recently put my work online
click here to check it out (http://img19.photobucket.com/albums/v58/feeblepenguin/)

[oddoneout]

Most obvious thing to me was the wing Is it mechanical? just for show cus she wouldnt get off the ground and wings can be v beautiful why not take advantage. the arm section looks a bit cylindrical, not as if it could work and the feather area looks as if its a ripped possibly better rendered feathers, they could still be made of some sort of metal I found this for you
http://www.deh.gov.au/water/wetlands/mwp/shorebirds/images/figure7.jpg