Spider Girl Sketch

[SexyVenomGirl]

hey guys this is my sketch of spider girl, tell me what u think?

http://img32.photobucket.com/albums/v95/sexyvenomgirl/Art%20Work/spidergirl.jpg

[Spidey-man]

Since you directed me to your thread i shall reply. Nice, very much in the Spider-girl style. Cept her head looks like an aliens!

Nice.

[Stray]

Great slender boney form, but I have to agree with Spidey about the head, looks a little too much like an inverted pear.

[SexyVenomGirl]

hey i noticed that too hehe i will fix it though thanx a million for the info!

[SexyVenomGirl]

hey i fixed the head, tell me if this is better now!

http://img32.photobucket.com/albums/v95/sexyvenomgirl/Art%20Work/sexyspidergirl.jpg

[SexyVenomGirl]

tell me what u think of this one!

[SexyVenomGirl]

here it is!

[IMG]http://img32.photobucket.com/albums/v95/sexyvenomgirl/Art%20Work/DSC00001.jpg[/IMG

[SexyVenomGirl]

I messed that up! here ya go!

http://img32.photobucket.com/albums/v95/sexyvenomgirl/Art%20Work/DSC00001.jpg

[jetpack42]

her right knee is kinda awkward. And in the 2nd one, her head looks too round, not...head shaped..enough. It should be more..ovalish, I think. Not too bad though, keep em coming.


:nana

[jetpack42]

didnt see the updated one...the head and knee look better...the left arm and hand look awkward though. the hand almost looks like a claw.

[SicFrost]

kool kool

[cartoonfox]

nice stuff.

on the second one, her left arm is a tad too small and bent at a slightly arwkward angle. and like someone said before, the head is a bit too round and not head shaped enough.

a trick i always use is when drawing, flip the drawing over and out it up agains a light sorce (like a light box or lamp etc) so you can see all the proportion and anatomy problems that your eys miss after a while. do this like every 5 minutes so you allways catch them :)


hope that helps. good luck with your stuff in the future.





peace

[dem0n]

in the right bottom cornor of each post there is an 'edit' button, might come in handy in the future ;)
i like the whole spiderman thingie, used to be a fan myself.
try using some references or even copy spidy out of a comicbook to get a hang of his movements etc.


post more :)

[Nikolai]

awesome pics! your good with textures!

[shortmikeshort]

Originally posted by dem0n

try using some references or even copy spidy out of a comicbook to get a hang of his movements etc.


Oh you did not just say that.

Do not copy out of a comic book. Reading it for ideas is fine, but copying it will only give you surface style. But keep drawing. I'm a Daredevil fan myself.