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donkeyslayer
April 7th, 2004, 11:09 PM
this is a little commissioned piece that i did for someone named Mike Borgia (http://www.mikeborgia.com) for a CD of his. it was quite fun, and i did it all in OC. naturally, there is a WPE of the whole thing... for all of those interested.
http://www.joinedartists.com/uploads/mikeb08.jpg (http://www.joinedartists.com/uploads/youarewhatyouhate2.wpe)

cheers.

DavidCousens
April 8th, 2004, 02:58 AM
I like the brush strokes here, gives a nice mood. Instantly reminds me of 'the picture of Dorian Gray'.

I love that story...sorry, started to ramble there! :)

kapturowski
April 8th, 2004, 03:19 AM
What I like best is the bottom part of the reflection and I like the values of grey. What bothers me is the shaded area in his armpit and on his forearm. The shirts wrinkles look a bit weird in that place. On the arm I think it would look better if you brightened up the shade a bit to blend it more with the rest of the arm.

And if that is his reflection and not some spectre in the mirror I would suggest adding some hair to its head to tie them together.

-adam

Scubasteve
April 8th, 2004, 11:29 AM
Great piece. Nice and moody.