Fighter Pilot (boobs)

[stephen]

I posted this on eatpoo also, but i'd like to know what you guys think about it, what could make it better etc.. etc...

http://www.seriks.com/images/pilotchick.jpg

sorry for the shitty arms/hands and no toes... and i think she's too bronze or something ugh :|

[Batteram]

Its a pretty good start. A few things I can suggest is that the right foot seems a bit too long and awkward in that pose. It kinda looks like it is turning into a kangaroos foot or something. I think it would be better if you define the toes and fingers/hands more to clarify the piece and look as though it is finished. I think you could put a few sharp highlights on the helmet and some on the jacket too to make the pic more stylish and appealing, because at the moment it kinda looks drab and kinda boring.
You have a good sense of anatomy though, keep it up.

[swampbug]

I like!.. her face is almost a dead ringer for a girl who goes to school here with me. I think the anatomy looks pretty good and convincing. Nice rendering too.

[keyth]

i think it's a nice start as well. the chest area looks a bit odd to me though. i think it may be a little too rounded in the area between the breasts. the eyes have character to them.

it would be cool to see a refined version with some softer angles in the anatomy.

KEEP'EM COM'N:chug:

[amphex]

Awesome work man =D
Your anatomy looks very good, no complaints here, except on that foot..but you obviously know what I mean from your apology =)
But why apologize when you can fix it?!

[Hudnut]

Stephen

Nice work! There's a lot of stuff on this piece that you handled quite nicely. The foundation is really strong. I like the rendering of the chest and the structure of the face is great. Also, nice values and color palette.

I'd like to see the knees and hands more finished. It's clear you've got a great start with the line work. As for the feet, my opinion is that they might actually be fine. Some women, especially tall women with long legs and arms, have large hands and feet. I think the feet look believable.

One other thing: the white of the eyes and the pupils look slightly cartoony. The sockets and eyelids look fine, just the eyeball itself looks off to me. I think you've done a great job with the structure of the face, but when my eye gets to the eyes, it loses some realism. One thing right off is that the whites of the eyes in your painting (the sclera) look flesh colored, as do the highlights on the cornea. Also, with the lids lowered like that, I think that they would be casting a shadow over the eyeballs, so they sclera would be darker and there'd probably be no highlight on the cornea. Just some thoughts.

Again, I think this is a really great start. You've nailed a lot of the anatomy and I think you've got a great piece of art here.

And thanks for the props on my orc.

Keep on posting!

Dave

[stephen]

hey, thanks alot guys for the nice comments and helpful critiques!

batteram, you hit it dead on, i have a hard time making something looked finished, definitely a weak(weak weak) point of mine, i think i'll go back at it and clean stuff up, thank you.

swampbug, thank you very much :)

keith, thank you, i'll see what i can do with it heh

amphex, thanks, i apologized cause i had a hard time with the feet/hands so i never got them to how i would like it, but im trying to go over it again and see what can be done with em.

hudnut, thanks alot, eyes are freakin impossible for me i can never do convincing eyes!! i'll have another go at them, tho.

peace