gawth girl :) .. need help

[garg]

http://www.thenetbox.com/blah/l10.jpg
C&C please! need help

[Travis_Bourbeau]

biting her lip with a intese stare may be a nice touch looks good so far imo just do soemthing with the lips and eys maybe through in something in the background not much help i know but maybe some encouragment

[garg]

http://www.thenetbox.com/blah/15copy.jpg

:)