Alien WIP

[Dodgymotah]

Hello, Here is a classic Grey alien. Very early stage at the moment. Anything you hate? Please tell me!
http://members.westnet.com.au/sbarwick/images/alien_wip/front_low%20poly.jpg
http://members.westnet.com.au/sbarwick/images/alien_wip/side_lowpoly.jpg
http://members.westnet.com.au/sbarwick/images/alien_wip/nurms_wire_side.jpg
http://members.westnet.com.au/sbarwick/images/alien_wip/nurms_wire_front.jpg

[digitalgannon]

hey, i really cant put input, and i guess thats why u have no replys yet. Show us more, maybe a concept too, or talk about were u wanna take this. okay? keep us posted, for for now you dont have enough to crit, sorry;)

[simon.wt]

it's very low-poly to start with, it would be good to know what it's for indeed, is it for a game/mod ? or just an atempt to create the alien that's in your mind ? :)
some more details would be nice.
My only crit would be, it's to "commercial" (don't know how to put this :p), it's like an alien we've seen o so many of, an original design would be alot cooler imho, but it's your alien offcourse, the other thing it, don't make the eyes so squre, they are the 1st things that we see, so i guess they should be more detailed, this is offcourse a WiP, so keep us posted with updates, i'm sure it will look alot better already on your second post

regards,

simon

[Dodgymotah]

Thanks for the replys guys.

Main purpose is for a guy I can animate in a simple setting for fun/learning.

It's an experiment in the "classic" grey alien thing, so yeah it's cliche country. But thats half the point. Instead of meshsmoothing my way through the boxyness I'm going to cut every vertex. I will update soon with some changes, I appreciate the crit. I hope to define animatable eyelids in the next update. It's my first serious attempt at organic modeling, I'm concious of trying to provide some quality work for people to view.

Here's hoping I have what it takes.