heretic finished

[dusty imp]

Um, yeah, so I think i finished it.
Still first work in wacom/painter, overall a great learning experience. Please c&c, your feedback helped a lot last time.
Thanks!!

http://gallery.tynu40k.net/albums/dospeh/heretic.jpg

[EVIL]

The background kills it.. the rest is great

[ohGr]

Bitch...ass...job. Very very cool. I gotta get my hands on a Wacom tablet but they're damn expensive.

[EVIL]

expencive? the cheapest one is around 60 bucks.. you dont need supersised tablets I have the grapphire 2 wich is A6 format, valito is the same size but its around 60 bucks instead of the 100+ for the grapphire2 and just as good..

[ohGr]

...Really? Everytime I look on eBay I see them for like $200. Hmm, maybe I'll get one then. Graphire 2?

[dusty imp]

Thanks guys, i appreciate the feedback (however humble it may be). I do need to work on the background, if anyone would be as kind as to explain what are the xact problems with it and possible ways to fix them i would greatly appreaciate it.

[nardfrog]

my usual critiques about color.... the sky is red which means the lighting be effected by that , which in turn means the subject should be effected by that. In other words you should work on lighting and color harmony. There should be more red in all the colors, more so in the background.

Also I recommened looking at how cloth folds and lays on the body, cuz its unatural in your pic.
THe hand on the right (his left) is too small and his forearm is too short.

Ofcourse these are just comments to improve on, not saying that it isnt a quality picture.

[dusty imp]

Thanks nardfrog, i will take that into account.
Coincidentally, few days ago in our drawing class i asked that the next model we're having posed with fabric cuz i knew i need to work on that. :D
I do disagree on the forarm and the size of the hand, however. Could you perhaps do a quick overdraw of that section of the arm?