tuffenuff
November 30th, 2002, 11:29 AM
Hi.. Guys and Girls..
Here is a BDU and weapon design for my personal project.
I'll add some more details and background for it later.
Happy Thanks Giving!!
- Jeff Kang -
http://members.tripod.lycos.co.kr/bucrane/combatsuitcolor01_small.jpg
ljefe
November 30th, 2002, 01:33 PM
well it looks pretty good to me. i'll just address the few problems i see:
the background, or more, the ground, looks off. he looks like he's floating on a bit of blurry asphault. i say either scrap a background, or if you're going to have one, do it right. it'll totally improve the whole aspect.
some of his armor looks flat, fake, etc. maybe add some more depth to it, especially around the joints. it almost looks like some cheap halloween costume around the knees, made of plastic or something. maybe also the occasional color variation to liven things up. not too much, but some.
his hold on the gun seems wierd to me. his left hand is hard to see for one, but also it looks like he would not hold it there if the gun was that big (and it its--looks like it could be 20 lbs.) the shading/anatomy on his right arm seems wrong to me. like it's too far forward.
nice haircut. :)
but overall i'd say its pretty good. fix a couple things, and you're set.
how's Walnut Creek treating you? i was just over there last weekend...
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