personnel carrier

[bonedog]

any critiques on the concept or rendering would be awesome.

thanks,
bonedog

http://www.imaginarydog.com/DigitalImages/tankcolor.jpg

[redships]

markers still give me nightmares.


i like some of the textures you've got going on and you've tech'd it out pretty well. my only crit is i think the black outline is too heavy and i'm not sure about the background maybe too much. also i'd knock down the shadow from black.

all n all though i can read your form. and hey even the thought of markers, chalk, and pencils gives me chills. keep up the good work!

[Sypha]

Yea, I agree.. markers are spooky. This kinda reminds me of a toaster. :D

[katana]

I agree that the black out line is far to heavy. Alos the blue square above the stacks looks more like a roof attached. The blue streaks that you have going across at an angle I think work well, but maybe need to be gradiated and solid. Overall though I think the design holds water, so to speak.

[bonedog]

yah, i agree, the background was rushed and my marker was running out. i thought i totally f*cked it up at one point but managed to save it a little bit in the end, albeit i had to throw in a gigantic black line to do it :D

thnx for the comments!

-bonedog