Character Illustration

[aehbon]

I'm doing some illustrations for a friends book. Anyone want to give me some feedback on some pictures?

I posted at 3dtalk, but usually don't get much feedback.

Thanks,
Brandon

http://www.thedarkvoid.com/aehbon/tempart/face3.jpg

http://www.thedarkvoid.com/aehbon/tempart/face2.jpg