slayer

[mephisto]

ill paint this in pshop. this is the finished rough (: let me know what to fix.
Thanks.

http://img20.photobucket.com/albums/v60/pantera/Slayer.jpg

[Molly]

Hey,

Nice pic, but you should extend the lower half of her body, she looks very short.
Adjust from her belly button down...

Mollyx

[mephisto]

Im starting to wonder if thats from me drawing the picture sitting down, and distorting the top half of it because of my perspective. Maybe I will skew it in pshop. Thanks.

[DanielandTheLionsPen]

This is boss man. I have no crits, I like it as is. Color is always nice but this doesn't need color.

No crits. A background would complete the pic but it's great as is.

[mephisto]

Here is the skewed version...i think it helps her feel less top heavy. Her lips are buggin me...ill fix those later i guess.

Thanks Dan!


http://img20.photobucket.com/albums/v60/pantera/Slayer1.jpg

[DanielandTheLionsPen]

I associate shortness with femininity so I have to say I liked the first one better.

The lips portrayed to me a slight annoyance with a "I'm a badass" attitude, which is very attractive :) If I were to do anything to the face I would get rid of the scar, but again: character counts.

This is great concept art dude, do you plan on doing anything else with this female warrior idea?

[bonedog]

cool drawing and concept. the only thing i'd advise is to watch the shadow edges in the belly area. it's a great area to show cool form, especially on the female. check out frazetta's work for some good examples.

-bonedog

[mephisto]

ok, so since I used a reference, and think that I acurately conveyed what that gave me, what are you suggesting I add? Specifically what forms?

[xia]

Nice one dude, the value is nice too. Paint it! :chug: :chug: :chug:

[AndreasM]

Looks cool. I think the left arm is a little too short. Try to mirror the image in PS if you can`t see it.
Good luck with the painting:)