Some love of future

[drawingsoul]

http://www.canvas-mil.com/board/data/johnsgallery/image5.jpg

[Batteram]

hehe, this is funny
very nice colours used and I like how you put a comical side to this picture...

[Lono]

shit man,, they got that sort of thing here in the present.
cept,, you dont gotta do it urinal style with two other dudes next to you checking out your technique..

and you know there gonna steal your moves...

id never let another man bite my technique.. cause if that shit got out,, it would blow up foo! it would be all over the place... next thing you know, Dan Rather would be using my stuff on Connie Chung..
:p


i think you should use harder lines and define your edges a bit more in your future pieces.. this whole thing kinda looks like im blurring my eyes a bit. i also think maby you over did it with the black and used it incorectly in a few places.

this would also work a lot better in a semi dynamic perspective.

not bad man! keep it up.


-Lono

[drawingsoul]

Yeah... I do need more practice. In this drawing I did my best to express some what sadness. Do you feel that? Well, may be not? However, thanks again for your good advise.
I believe you got a very special eyes for critic thing. Have a nice day.:)

[Fozzybar]

drawingsoul, if you want to express sadness, you should lower the saturation...this image is like a candy...pink and with high saturation....

But i like the idea very much! Great!

Oh...maybe you could straighten the shape of the neon sign...it would look better...