zombie killer

[Punchy]

http://idisk.mac.com/vriley/Public/zom_s.jpg

[young paddy1]

very atmospheric, cute looking face for a hardened killer, nice.
my only crit is it looks like she's got something really bulky in her left (our right) pocket.

[merd]

Wow absolute nice colors!
The only thing is, that her face looks a bit cat-like
But expect from that your pic rocks!
:chug:

[Zeb]

So smooth...

So creapy...

Definitely check out what Paddy said, that side does bulge a little too much.

Those brights don't really suit the feeling of the image, at least to me they don't. For some reason this feels like it should be a darker, more gloomy image.

Still looks good though!!

[Kresh]

Ya definatly awesome. I like how you back lit the character, however you should get rid of the black outlines of the character where it is really bright to make it more convincing. Somebody said that she looked too cat like with the face. I can see where they are coming from. The problem is coming from that weird indent that everyone has (don't know what to call it) between the nose and the top lip. Try lighting it up more abit so it doesn't stick out too much. Once again awesome, keep up the great work man.

[Punchy]

wow. Thanks for the great crits. Very helpful. I tried to turn some edges around the pocket to flatten it out a bit, and I got rid of the highlights under the nose to remove the cat effect.


I'm trying to get aways from the black line as a crutch, but I brought it back in as an overlay just to see what it would look like. Here it is with the black line....

http://idisk.mac.com/vriley/Public/zom2_s.jpg

[TheMightyArtistChu]

it looks like her hand is suppost to be in her right (left?) pocket, but isn't, or is there something in there? Like a big wallet, ammo, energy bar, etc.