bird man

[Wonn]

hello! here is my new work.
I just used photoshop7. I found it's faster to paint than paniter, easier for me to control. well, they have different effects too.
c & c are welcome!

http://perilith.com/~james/wonn/wonn-birdman.jpg

[young paddy1]

remove the dragon from the background and it's all sweet. his free hand is a bit big but you might have been going for that?

[Wonn]

ah yes. I've been lazy to paint the background so I just put a picture there, doesn't match very well. removing it, good idea!;)

[MercuryArt]

I agree, drop the dragon in the background, it's a bit distracting and a bit corny as a backdrop.

Your anatomy looks pretty good in the chest and shoulder area, as well as his lower region, but it's suffering a bit in the abdominal area. His abs are massive, taking up way too much of the stomach, and there's apparently only room for a "four pack", as the top row of abs seems a bit crunched under the pecs.

Otherwise, I think it's a nice painting.

[young paddy1]

On the abs thing the top four pack should finish along a lateral line with the navelthe other two should be below the navel.

[Wonn]

I changed the background, is this one better? I didn't make it seriously too, but ar least there is no strange dragon...

thank you for the advice of the body. actually I haven't drew men's body that much, so there must be problems... thank you for helping me know about it more!

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