Vampira

[klesk33]

Here´s my last piece. Its only penciled, but I plan to give it colours with photoshop. I would appreciate your comments.
Thanks.
http://www.rebelassaultworld.com/klesk33/web3/imagenes/pinup19.jpg

[Sketch]

Nice line work. I would thicken up her stomach area a bit. Looks too skinny. That's a vicious bite she has... normally vampires just put a couple of puncture holes, but he's missing a quarter of his neck.:evilbat:

[chris]

hehe, i think her smile and the fact that most of his neck is missing go good together... its like she overindulged, and shes comfortable with that. ya know, neck biting is to vampire chicks what ben & jerry's ice cream is to the average chick, or so im told. i agree about her skinniness though, also, the guys hand is kinda big(unless thats youre style). very attractive linework, and i cant believe you drew every single one of those leaves! nice one, post more :)

chris

[ukhaa]

:::: cough mike mignola right shoulder tattoo cough :::
i agree about the stomach.
good line work.

[klesk33]

Thank you very much for your comments, I have realized some things I didnt notice about this piece.
Yeah, the tatoo you say is a Mignola design (oh, I forgot to draw the swastika in the circle). I love this great artist and Hellboy, he is really a genius. Watch out for his new mini-series "The third wish"

[Ryaken]

Wow. Now this is cool.. How much time did you spend doing all those leaves on the ground.. yeesh :hmm:

Have to agree with the waist line.. I like babes with thin wastes, but damn.. it's thinner than her head. :ep:

I am assuming the neck is a blood splotch, right. It doesn't looks like his neck is gone to me. :mumble:


Anyway, I love your style Klesk33.. can't wait to see more.

[davi]

love your style
great piece

[hed|lamb]

Hey, pretty cool image, thus far. I really like that sinister grin of hers'. =)

What I would've said has already been said, about her stomach and all.

[tobalno3]

i love the style

[Atmospheria]

This line work is so good...it's clean...nice work...

[tobalno3]

i don't know whether to have sympathy for that guy or anger that i wasn't him

[narisiaril]

Aw, the stomach's fine being exagerated. This *is* fantasy, it doesn't have to be realistic. The picture is impressive. I'd never have the patience for all the leaves (not more than once, at least). The details look good. However, the tree on the right is a little distracting. You might take it out and leave more attention on her. Maybe just stick the moon or cloud formation in. But I'm no expert. *shrug*

[TJ Verhagen]

Ooh.. great! indeed very nice linework..
looks very clean and pofessionally done:)

GJ!