this week's life painting and drawings (BIG DL)

[mime]

I'm currently attending 2 life drawing workshop, one nude and the other with clothes, i might join a third next week.

paintings
about 30-40 minuts each
done in acrylic

http://erhnam.free.fr/life26_2b.jpg
http://erhnam.free.fr/life26_1b.jpg


2 mins sketches
http://erhnam.free.fr/life27_5.jpg
http://erhnam.free.fr/life27_6.jpg
http://erhnam.free.fr/life27_4.jpg

15 mins
http://erhnam.free.fr/life27_2.jpg
http://erhnam.free.fr/life27_3.jpg
I really like this last one

and 35mins in pastel on colored paper
http://erhnam.free.fr/life27_1.jpg

[mime]

i know i usually dont like whinning about no replies, but i would like comments on the color on these one, those was my first life paintings, struggling with color choices and technique (45 mins is a short time for me yet, i dont know what to mix, what to choose, etc ....) and i would glady have some comments on my color choices, values, saturation, etc ....

sorry to bother :)

and i know i said it was a big DL, but its not that big :)

[I.was.ink]

Well, I like the first one, but the second one, the girl lying down looks kind of flat. I'm guessing because of the light source. U know what might help out is pretending that the sunlight isn't there. only the spot light, or just concentrate on one light source. Turn off the light and then on and u will see where the two differnet light sources come from. Tell me if this helps out. but u seem to be doing okay. Just keep practing